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Witam.
Zamierzam wysłać maila ze skargą na nierzetelne przeprowadzenie liczenia pasażerów w komunikacji miejskiej. Proszę o sprawdzenie czy taka forma będzie zrozumiała i poprawna:

Martedi mattina del 23 novembre sono stato testimone del conteggio dei passeggeri e dei tempi di percorso fra le fermate, su uno degli,autobus della linea 904. Il compito e' stato effetuato con poca curatezza. Il numero di persone che scendeva e saliva e il tempo dell`arrivo alla precisa fermata, sul foglio risultava 5 fermate prima. Quando ho fatto notare l`errore, gli spazi vuoti sono stati riempiti subito con i dati fitizzi. Non e` stato segnalato sul modulo, che in diverse fermate non e` salito nessuno per mancanza di spazio sull`autobus, ma secondo il modulo in questo momento sull`autobus c`erano circa 50 persone.

Proszę też o podpowiedź jakie formy powitania/pozdrowień będą odpowiednie.

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Tekst wydaje sie w porzadku, ale ja zmienilabym dwa zdania. Pierwsze to: "Il numero di persone che scendeva e saliva....." ja napisalabym raczej (po "curatezza."

Ho notato due gravi errori, per primo il numero di persone che scendevano e salivano sull'autobus non era esatto. L'orario dell'arrivo del mezzo alla precisa fermata era diverso da quello segnalato sul modulo, da cui sembrava che l'autobus ci mettesse meno tempo a fare il suo percorso. La differenza era di almeno cinque fermate.
Natomiast ostatnie zdanie wedlug mnie powinno brzmiec:
Nei diversi tratti del percorso l'autobus era talmente pieno che le persone non riuscivano a salirci. Nel modulo invece, risultavano circa 50 persone al bordo.
Nie wiem do kogo jest ten list ale zwykle przy takich okazjach pisze sie, jesli to jakas instytucja:
"All'attenzione di .... "albo "Spett.le....."
jesli konkretna osoba:
" Egregio Signor....."
na koncu listu zwykle pisze sie :
"Distinti Saluti"
i nie zapomnij akcentu nad i w martedì
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